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Posted: 2018-03-30T05:35:19+10:00 In:

The acrimonious break-up of the house couple sparks a cold war between the men and women living in a student house in 1980s Manchester (UK).

The acrimonious break-up of the house couple sparks a cold war between the men and women living in a student house in 1980s Manchester (UK).
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    1. Best Answer
      Logliner

      I’m not sure what a “house couple” is. Are they the owners of the house the students are living in? I think you need something juicier here that draws us in and suggests what the battle in the film might be about and what’s at stake.

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    2. Best Answer
      Singularity

      >>>sparks a cold war

      That’s a predicament, a situation for a plot.? But the logline doesn’t follow through with a plot..? And a logline is a concise statement of a plot.

      And we have no idea who is the protagonist.

      Who is the protagonist?? What is his or her objective goal?

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