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When an all-work-no-play high school valedictorian who has gotten into an A-list college discovers her party-animal peers also got into A-list colleges, she resolves to cram four years of fun into one night.
I'm embarrassed to say that I didn't know the word 'valedictorian'. On the other hand, I can proudly claim that I deducted its meaning thanks to my Latin studies. ;) That said, I believe the sentence can be tightened without sacrificing essential story material - without having seen the film - likeRead more
I’m embarrassed to say that I didn’t know the word ‘valedictorian’. On the other hand, I can proudly claim that I deducted its meaning thanks to my Latin studies. 😉
That said, I believe the sentence can be tightened without sacrificing essential story material – without having seen the film – like this:
“When an all-work-no-play high school graduate discovers her party-animal peers are equally accepted into A-list colleges, she must catch up on life, and cram four years of fun into one night.”
What do you think?
The ‘catch up on life’ is an attempt at more explicitly stating the theme.
See lessA 15 year old child prodigy who was born with amazing powers and abilities must unwittingly use those powers to save the city of Boston from a psychotic superpowered cult leader with the help of his equally reluctant and estranged grandfather…a former criminal genius supervillain.
Hey Mike, I have put the logline in the right place, and concatenated the separate sentences into one. "Unwittingly" doesn't work for me: the hero must be determined and conscious of the action(s) they take in most of the film (i.e. Act 2). Have you tried our logline generator? Go to: https://loglinRead more
Hey Mike,
I have put the logline in the right place, and concatenated the separate sentences into one.
“Unwittingly” doesn’t work for me: the hero must be determined and conscious of the action(s) they take in most of the film (i.e. Act 2).
Have you tried our logline generator? Go to: https://loglines.org/generate and see what result you get, then post it in a comment below!
See lessWhen a young Australian Muslim girl loses her mother, her grief turns to an obsession with building robots, where she fights for the chance to win an International Robotics Championship and realise a dream her mother never could.
Loving it. Rock on, Gstar!!
Loving it.
Rock on, Gstar!!
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