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Three half-siblings meet each other for the first time after their absent (and now dead) father left them millions of dollars, with one big catch.
Weird, I was just talking about how in a movie or tv show if someone inherits a bunch of money, there is always a catch. Because this idea has been done before, you are going to want to tell us the 'catch' in the logline in, to show us how your idea is stands out. ----- Brewster's millions: Monty BrRead more
Weird, I was just talking about how in a movie or tv show if someone inherits a bunch of money, there is always a catch.
Because this idea has been done before, you are going to want to tell us the ‘catch’ in the logline in, to show us how your idea is stands out.
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Brewster’s millions: Monty Brewster learns he’s inherited $8 million from a distant relative: The catch, he must spend $1 million of that money in less than two months to inherit the rest.
Easy Money: A hard living, gambling addict must change his unhealthy ways to inherit his mother-in-law’s colossal fortune,
Goodwin games: Three grown siblings return home after their father’s death, and unexpectedly find themselves poised to inherit a vast fortune ? if they compete in a series of games, winner take all.
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The catch is the hook, it tells us in the logline what they have to overcome in order to receive the money.
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
See lessDuring the first few weeks of a zombie outbreak, a penniless college grad attempts to fund his refuge by hosting a house party, but his plans are jeopardized when a new acquaintance, turns out to be a serial killer.
I believe you added too much. Zombies, house party then serial killer, I was going with it until the the last bit. A house party at the zombie apocalypses sounds interesting, no need for a serial killer, it takes away from the story and makes for way too long of a logline. "When the zombie apocalypsRead more
I believe you added too much. Zombies, house party then serial killer, I was going with it until the the last bit.
A house party at the zombie apocalypses sounds interesting, no need for a serial killer, it takes away from the story and makes for way too long of a logline.
“When the zombie apocalypses arrives, a college party animal throws an end of the world party to end all parties!”
Party at the end of the world
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
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Maybe even, Retired Luchador I like how you upped the stakes with the daughter.
Maybe even, Retired Luchador
I like how you upped the stakes with the daughter.
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