There’s some interesting cuts to shorten this without changing the meaning.
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“When a soldier returns from an overseas deployment…”
“When a soldier returns from deployment”
(Deployment implies overseas, so overseas isn’t needed)
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“And finds that the family home has completely vanished…”
“And finds his family home has vanished…”
(One thing I find in my first drafts; overuse of the word ‘that’. Many times it can be cut)
{I used alt-f to find “That” and go through my entire screenplay, I also use alt-f for the word “is” as well}
(Also, you don’t need to say ‘completely vanished’, since ‘vanished’ means the same thing)
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“He sets out to find his home and to discover who he really is.”
“He sets out to find his home and possibly himself.”
(This one is more a matter of taste, not really an edit, I might even use the word Journey even though it has a few more letters)
“He journeys to find his home and possibly himself”
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Anyway; hopefully you can see how I made those cuts and why. Loglines are great practice for script editing. If you can cut a logline to 25 words, you can cut unnecessary words in a script as well.

Hope that helped, good luck with this!