1. Posted: March 21, 2013In:

    When Earth is invaded by aliens, A Mafia enforcer must put his vandettas aside, unite the five families and defend the earth the only way he knows how: Violently.

    Richiev Singularity

    Godfather and Aliens :)

    Godfather and Aliens 🙂

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  2. Posted: March 21, 2013In:

    When the bosses lady catches her philandering husband cheating, she takes revenge doing hits from the inside, but when a bounty is put on her head she must survive the snakes on the strip.

    Richiev Singularity

    Hit the wrong button :) ^^^ Is the lady the wife of a mob boss? (You just say boss, so it could be a corporate boss) If so I would start with, "When the wife of a mob boss catches him cheating..." I find it helps if you name the protagonist first. Example: Wife of mob boss instead of Bosses wife; beRead more

    Hit the wrong button 🙂 ^^^

    Is the lady the wife of a mob boss? (You just say boss, so it could be a corporate boss)

    If so I would start with, “When the wife of a mob boss catches him cheating…”

    I find it helps if you name the protagonist first. Example: Wife of mob boss instead of Bosses wife; because that helps making it clear right off the bat who the protagonist is.

    Hope that helped. good luck with this.

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  3. Posted: March 21, 2013In:

    When the bosses lady catches her philandering husband cheating, she takes revenge doing hits from the inside, but when a bounty is put on her head she must survive the snakes on the strip.

    Richiev Singularity
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