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Wrongfully expelled Harvard undergrad Alex moves to Sydney, where he is introduced to the violent undeworld of soccer hooliganism
These are the types of movies I like to go to where we get drawn into an interesting world. However there is no conflict here. There isn't any goal or anything standing in his way. So I really like the premise but I would like to know what is standing in Alex's way. Great story idea, good luck withRead more
These are the types of movies I like to go to where we get drawn into an interesting world.
However there is no conflict here. There isn’t any goal or anything standing in his way.
So I really like the premise but I would like to know what is standing in Alex’s way.
Great story idea, good luck with this!
See lessWhen writing teacher Karels students start failing, he must kick it into overdrive in order to get his students to pass before the end of the Semester.
How about this: "After a beleaguered teacher discovers his school's deep budget cuts, he has till semester's end to reach his failing but creative students before his writing program is closed." This way you get a sense of stakes if the teacher doesn't get his students to pass. Good luck!
How about this:
“After a beleaguered teacher discovers his school’s deep budget cuts, he has till semester’s end to reach his failing but creative students before his writing program is closed.”
This way you get a sense of stakes if the teacher doesn’t get his students to pass. Good luck!
See lessA worldwide hero and modern prophet is faced with losing everything as a stronger hero rises. He is now forced to defend his title to stay on top of the world that he controls.
How about something like this: "When a new superhero supplants him as head of the league of champions, the former leader must fight to reclaim his old position when he discovers the usurper secretly works for the league of Evil" Hope that helped, good luck with this!
How about something like this:
“When a new superhero supplants him as head of the league of champions, the former leader must fight to reclaim his old position when he discovers the usurper secretly works for the league of Evil”
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
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