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A woman who tries to raise her catatonic son on her own suddenly discovers a shocking secret about him.
What he said ^^^ (Just pretend I said it first so I look smart)
What he said ^^^ (Just pretend I said it first so I look smart)
See lessThe dying emperor of a crumbling galactic empire struggles to hold onto power amidst political intrigue and a coming war.
I do get a sense of stetting and a hint of story from this logline, However It would be good if you told us what he was struggling against. His ambition son? A longtime rival? A galactic insurgency? Still I really like the idea, good luck with this!
I do get a sense of stetting and a hint of story from this logline, However It would be good if you told us what he was struggling against. His ambition son? A longtime rival? A galactic insurgency?
Still I really like the idea, good luck with this!
See lessAccused of a crime for revenge, a sensitive, feminine male struggles to keep his sanity while incarcerated in a small town county jail fully inhabited by a variety of unpredictable strangers.
The problem isn't that you should drop the line, just that the line can be read two different ways. How about something like: After being falsely accuse of a crime... After committing a crime of revenge...
The problem isn’t that you should drop the line, just that the line can be read two different ways.
How about something like:
After being falsely accuse of a crime…
After committing a crime of revenge…
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