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  1. Posted: March 15, 2013In: Public

    Trapped inside a deadly house of mirrors, a copy-cat killer suffering double vision becomes the original killers next victim.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on March 17, 2013 at 4:58 am

    Just re-read what I wrote. I should have used "from" instead "of" "When a copy-cat killer's latest victim creates headlines, he draws unwanted attention from the original serial killer who doesn't want to share the spotlight." You could also add something like "and to survive, he must murder his demRead more

    Just re-read what I wrote. I should have used “from” instead “of”

    “When a copy-cat killer’s latest victim creates headlines, he draws unwanted attention from the original serial killer who doesn’t want to share the spotlight.”

    You could also add something like

    “and to survive, he must murder his demented Idol”

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  2. Posted: March 15, 2013In: Public

    Trapped inside a deadly house of mirrors, a copy-cat killer suffering double vision becomes the original killers next victim.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on March 17, 2013 at 4:48 am

    I have seen the house of mirrors in TV shows and movies. The scene usually lasts about five minutes. They think they see the killer, shoot, glass breaks; it was just a mirror image. Which image is the killer? which image is a reflection? Having an entire two hour movie take place in what is usuallyRead more

    I have seen the house of mirrors in TV shows and movies. The scene usually lasts about five minutes.

    They think they see the killer, shoot, glass breaks; it was just a mirror image. Which image is the killer? which image is a reflection?

    Having an entire two hour movie take place in what is usually a five minute scene might get repetitive.

    I would end the movie in the house of mirrors if you love the idea but not set the entire movie in that location.

    “When a copy-cat killer’s latest victim creates headlines, he draws the unwanted attention of the original serial killer who doesn’t want to share the spotlight.”

    -Killer be killed-

    Hope that helped. Good luck with this!

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  3. Posted: March 15, 2013

    A tortured former artist, now a compassionate young counselor, has dedicated his life to helping other misfortunate souls. As the troubles of a difficult past continues to cause harm, another life he struggles harder to save is just as important to him as his own?

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on March 17, 2013 at 4:36 am

    How about this? "When a compassionate councilors past catches up with him, he finds in order to save an out-of-control teens life he first must save his own." Hope that helped, good luck with this!

    How about this?

    “When a compassionate councilors past catches up with him, he finds in order to save an out-of-control teens life he first must save his own.”

    Hope that helped, good luck with this!

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