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A pig farmers daughter trapped on an island must protect her newborn baby from a bloodthirsty pig born with human hands.
This logline gives us, The lead, the leads goal, (and the leads goal of saving her newborn is compelling) It tells us what is standing in the leads way and gives us a sense of genre. all in under 25 words. Good job. At this point all the logline needs is very small tweaking and it should be perfect.Read more
This logline gives us, The lead, the leads goal, (and the leads goal of saving her newborn is compelling) It tells us what is standing in the leads way and gives us a sense of genre. all in under 25 words.
Good job.
At this point all the logline needs is very small tweaking and it should be perfect. I would take Kriss Toliday’s advice and start with “When” or “After”
Great logline, good luck with this!
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I forgot to mention, that doesn't mean you don't have a great idea, just that it isn't represented in your logline as written. Sounds interesting, good luck with this!
I forgot to mention, that doesn’t mean you don’t have a great idea, just that it isn’t represented in your logline as written.
Sounds interesting, good luck with this!
See lessA grieving mother get prescribed drugs that gives her visions of murders that later occurs.
The problem with this logline; there's no story, only situation. If the grieving mother saw a specific murder that she must stop then there would be a story but as written you don't have a story, just the set-up for a story.
The problem with this logline; there’s no story, only situation.
If the grieving mother saw a specific murder that she must stop then there would be a story but as written you don’t have a story, just the set-up for a story.
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